It's a word,
It's a word,
A word I can't describe.
Is it sweet,
is it sour,
Is it something divine?
I'm starting to really like making these, whatever they are. They can be simple, direct, or mean nothing. It's fun playing with words.
It's a word,
It's a word,
A word I can't describe.
Is it sweet,
is it sour,
Is it something divine?
2 comments:
I agree that it is fun to play with words. And I find it cool that you have this under the 'poetry' label, since I think that is what it is.
This reminds me of a couple poems that I had to read in various English classes, because it takes one thing and contemplates it. You should read poems by Williams Carlos Williams; he writes this sort of poetry. Good stuff.
:D
Yep, definitely poetry - when you are writing in stanzas such as these - poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be considered a poem - there are other things that constitute a poem but anyway - you are writing poetry - keep up the good work - keep writing - and if you ever get to the point you need someone to comment on some longer stuff - look me up or let Chai know to contact me - E :)
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